Improv 1 Week 6

The improv im doing is on pg. 71 of the writing poetry. The exercise is downplaying polemics and the poems goes like this:

                                                    Do
you still hang your words in air, ten years
unfinished, glued to your notice board, with gaps
or empties for the unimaginable phase

my piece:

                                                   Are
your hands trembling, seconds before
mouthing, enunciating your slurs, with hopes
or goals for the coming trials