This week's improv is a revision of a previous one here is the original piece:
my piece:
Are
your hands trembling, seconds before
mouthing, enunciating your slurs, with hopes
or goals for the coming trials
I decided to move somethings around and this is what i got.
Is some
thing violently caressing words that
form, mouthing seconds and slurs,
of trials of hope.
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